Disappeared for twenty years
In 2019，an 73 years old woman is lying on the bed. She was critically ill. She want’s to find her’s son before she dead. Her son’s name is Yongqiang Wang.
So, she is advertising this information on the TV and Internet, and many netizens want’s to help her.
Finally, one of the netizens finded the Yongqiang Wang. Wang is a engineer in American. When called by family of the Wang, he said:”Don’t call me anymore, I won’t come back.”
Some people believe, Wang is an apatipathy man. But, he explains. “Even an upright offcial finds it hard to settle a family quarrel.”
Therefore, Why Wang disconnected with his father and mother for twanty-years?
Wang’s father told the journalist，“My son is missing after he gone to Japan.”
“My son was talented. He always has a good grade in school. He worked hard to be an physical Doc of Chinese Academy of Sciences. Then, Wang became a Postdoc of Peking University.”
Yongqiang Wang called the parents: “I would go to Japan with my wife for work.”
“It is an excellent things. We support’s his choices.” Wang’s father said.
The parent didn’t have money to buy the medicine soon. So they called the Wang for money.
However, Wang didn’t send money to his parent. Beside, he is missing from now on.
The parent corresponde with Wang’s classmates、teachers、collegue. They also connected to Wang’s exWife. But nobody knows where he gone.
Then, the parent called the police. With the help of the police, their realized that Wang gaved up Chinese identity. From now on, Wang is missing.
Beyond their imagenery, Wang have a good job in America, with a high salary also.
One of the reason that Wang didn’t came back is, his parent don’t support he goes to school. The parents wished that Wang start working as early as possible.
His parents are poor. Wang insisted part-work and part-study to finish his study life. Wang belives that his parents do not love him at all When they refuse to join the wedding ceremony of Wang’s.
When he gone to Japan, the parents asked Wang for money again. His wife argue with Wang about that. Becouse of that, they was divorced.
Wang cann’t stand anymore this year. He was thiry years old, but his parents want to control Wang’s whole life.
Do you surppots Wang’s choice? What do you think about？
修改后
In 2019， a 73 years old woman is lying on the bed. She was critically ill. She wants to find her’s son before she died. Her son’s name is Yongqiang Wang.
So, she is advertising this information on the TV and Internet, and many netizens want to help her.
Finally, one of the netizens found Yongqiang Wang. Wang is an engineer in America. When called by the family of the Wang, he said:” Don’t call me anymore, I won’t come back.”
Some people believe, Wang is a cold-hearted man. But, he explains. “Even an upright official finds it hard to settle a family quarrel.”
Therefore, Why was Wang disconnected from his father and mother for twenty years?
Wang’s father told the journalist， “My son is missing after he went to Japan.”
“My son was talented. He always got good grades in school. He worked hard to be a physics Doctor at the Chinese Academy of Sciences. Then, Wang became a Postdoc of Peking University.”
Yongqiang Wang called the parents: “I would go to Japan with my wife for work.”
“It is an excellent thing. We support his choices.” Wang’s father said.
The parent didn’t have money to buy the medicine soon. So they called Wang for money.
However, Wang didn’t send money to his parent. He is missing from that time besides.
The parents correspond with Wang’s classmates、teachers、colleagues. They also connected to Wang’s ex-Wife. But nobody knows where he went.
Then, the parent called the police. With the help of the police, they realized that Wang gave up his Chinese identity. From now on, Wang is missing.
Beyond their imagery, Wang has a good job in America, with a high salary also.
One of the reasons that Wang didn’t come back is that his parent doesn’t support him goes to school. The parents wished that Wang start working as early as possible.
His parents are poor. Wang insisted on part-work and part-study to finish his study life. Wang believes that his parents do not love him at all When they refuse to join his wedding ceremony.
When he went to Japan, the parents asked Wang for money again. His wife argues with Wang about that. Because of that, they were divorced.
Wang can’t stand it anymore this year. He was thirty years old, but his parents want to control Wang’s whole life.
Do you support Wang’s choice? What do you think about it？
总结
- 逗号后面要加空格
- 文章里s乱飞。s不能乱用。
- 单词拼写需要正确，不够熟练
- 积累一些谚语的英文说法，可以灵活运用到文章中