雅思写作课程-第五课-task1的段落
在雅思写作课程-第二课-图表练习 中，我们已经练习过了一个图表题。
在本章中，我们浅要讨论之前犯过的错，以及正确的task1的段落结构。
正确的task1段落结构
介绍 (这个图表展示了什么内容)
概论;概况（总结一下大体的趋势）
主体段落A（给出具体的信息）
主体段落B（给出具体的信息）
之前的错误和评价
This chart told us that from 2001 to 2006, the percentage of adult who ate foods was increased. From 2006 to 2008, The number was declined. The percentage of children who ate fruit and vegetables was increasing since 2004. The children’s number was declined in 2008.
这一段应该概述图表的内容，画线的部分不属于第一段的内容，应该放在第三段和第四段。
From 2001 to 2003, children ate the same fruit and vegetables per day. But since 2004, the consumption of the foods was suddenly increased. At the same time, men ate the same foods in three years.
主体段落的内容应该再丰富一点。增加连接词、语法和词汇的练习。
Maybe during 2006, the finance crisis happened. So all the people was staved. Adult ate less food than children because parent will give food to their baby. Parent will prevent their children staving to death, so this explained the number of Children’s food consumption still increasing in 2007. However the women’s number was declined.
task1的小作文应该描述现象，不需要写自己的推断和原因。这属于跑题，会扣分的。
This chart precisely depicts the relationship between men and women, adult and children. Why the number of food consumption is changed is still unknown.
最后一段一定不要写总结，例如in conclusion。总结和概述写在第二段就好了。这属于跑题，会扣分的。
图表练习001
请结合本篇文章学到的段落框架和 雅思写作课程-第三课-图表的词汇
我们再次练习一个task1小作文
【用一两句话转述图表大意】The bar chart gives us information about the quantities of boys and girls playing six kinds of sports in an English town in 2012.
【描述趋势】Overall, compares to other sport, the boys like football the most while the girls favourite sport were swimming. Hockey had the least boys and girls who like to play in 2012.
【给出数据】As we can see, the boys’ figure playing tennis was 50 while girl’s figure was nearly 40. Meanwhile, Cycling also has more boys likes to play than girls. The boys’ who like to play cycling was almost 40 but the girls’ number was 20. In the terms of Badminton and swimming, girls prefer to play than boys. The number of girls who prefer badminton and boys who prefer swimming was nearly the same ( 40 people and more than 40 people).
【给出数据】The number of boys who like to play football was 60. Compares to six sports, football was the most popular sport among the boys. The number of girls who like to swimming was 50.