雅思写作课程-第十三课-大作文的主要段落

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More and more people are moving to cities to look for work. What problems does this cause? What are the possible solutions?

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In the past, most of Chinese people lived in the villages. However, nowadays young people prefer live in the big city. This phenominon is common around the world. Let’s me illustrate this significant fact in the rest of the essay.

Beijing city has more than 20 million people. This lead to Beijing has more work opportunities than other city. Because job is to fullfills other people’s requirements. If you live in a small village which only has 20 people lived, so your customer’s number is 20. However, If you live in a extremely huge city, your customer’s number will be 20 million.

First, there are many traffic problems in the rush hour. Furthermore, People are not allowed to buy a car in Beijing even if you have enough many. Beijing have so many people that if everyone has a car, the road system won’t work.

Secondly, in the past of 20 years, the prize of the house has been increasing. Young man can’t afford a flat in the big city because any of flat is expensive. But a lot of girls’ mother ask for flat to marries. If you can’t afford a flat, you won’t have a wife. Even if you have a girl friend, her mother are not allowed her to marry with you.

Last but most importantly, small villages are lack of young women. As you know, all of the young people live in the big city Because villages do not have job opportunity. With times go by, villages are obsolete. There are no infants in the small villages. As a result, many villages will be disappeared.

Japan is an aging city and China has the same problem with Japan. The solution of Japan is to make many policies to encourage young people come back to the villages. Their gorvenment has give a decent of money to young people who are willing to live in the village. I don’t think this policy will solve the serious problem. The only way to do is migrate the company to the village.

In conclusion, urban city life is admirable. We can’t stop people’s desire to force them live in the small places. People are moving to cities indeed bring us a lot of questions. It’s a tough question to solve.

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过去,大多数中国人生活在农村。然而,现在年轻人更喜欢生活在大城市。这种现象在全球范围内都很普遍。让我在接下来的文章中阐述这个重要事实。

In the past, the majority of Chinese people resided in rural villages. However, nowadays, young individuals are inclined to prefer living in large cities. This phenomenon is common worldwide. Let me illustrate this significant fact in the following essay.

北京市有超过2000万人口。这导致北京比其他城市拥有更多的工作机会。因为工作是为了满足他人的需求。如果你住在一个只有20个人的小村庄,那么你的顾客数量就是20。然而,如果你住在一个极大的城市,你的顾客数量将达到2000万。

Beijing, with a population exceeding 20 million, offers more work opportunities compared to other cities. Employment exists to fulfill the requirements of others. In a small village with only 20 inhabitants, your customer base would be limited to 20 individuals. Conversely, residing in a bustling metropolis grants access to a potential customer base of 20 million.

首先,在高峰时段有很多交通问题。此外,人们不被允许在北京购买汽车,即使你有足够的钱。北京人口众多,如果每个人都拥有一辆车,道路系统将无法运作。

Firstly, traffic congestion poses numerous challenges during rush hours. Moreover, car ownership is restricted in Beijing, irrespective of financial capability. With a vast population, granting each individual a car would overwhelm the road infrastructure.

其次,在过去的20年里,房价一直在上涨。年轻人无法负担得起大城市的公寓,因为任何一套房都很昂贵。但是,许多女孩的家庭要求结婚时必须有一套房子。如果你买不起房子,可能会影响到你找到配偶的机会。即使你有一个女朋友,她的家人也可能不允许她嫁给你。

Secondly, housing prices have surged in the last two decades. Affording a flat in a major city is beyond the means of many young people. However, for numerous young women’s families, a flat is a prerequisite for marriage. Failure to meet this requirement may impact one’s prospects of finding a spouse. Even if a romantic relationship is established, the girlfriend’s family may disapprove of the union.

最后,在小村庄中缺少年轻女性。由于工作机会有限,大多数年轻人都倾向于向城市地区迁移。随着时间的推移,村庄逐渐被淘汰,出生率也下降。因此,许多村庄面临消失的风险。

Lastly, small villages lack young women. As a result of limited job opportunities, most young people gravitate towards urban areas. Over time, villages become obsolete, and childbirths dwindle. Consequently, many villages face the risk of disappearing.

中国面临着与日本相似的问题,即人口老龄化。日本已经采取了鼓励年轻人返回农村的政策。政府向愿意在农村居住的人提供财政激励措施。然而,我认为单靠这些措施不能解决问题。另一种可能的解决方案是将企业迁移到农村地区。

China faces similar challenges to Japan, an aging country. Japan has implemented policies encouraging young people to return to rural areas. The government provides financial incentives to those willing to reside in the countryside. However, I believe these measures alone cannot solve the problem. An alternative solution could involve relocating companies to rural areas.

总的来说,城市生活确实吸引人的。我们无法抑制人们生活在大城市的愿望。人们迁往城市引发了许多问题。解决这个问题是一项艰巨的任务。

In conclusion, urban city life is indeed appealing. We cannot suppress people’s desire to inhabit large cities. The migration to urban areas raises numerous questions. Addressing this issue poses a formidable task.